Opera Night!
I was passing by the woods
On a windy night-dark,
Something strange happened
Leaving me with a mark!
As the night went darker
I felt my body tremble,
A sudden howl of a wolf
Made my heart crumble
At far-off came a light
That made me doubt my sight,
As it grew bigger
Ahead came up a figure!
It was a doe
Looking at its best,
Gave a little tune
Followed by the rest!
Fountains' murmuring
Trees' rustling,
Gave a sort of touch-up
Soaring my spirits up!
Birds' tunings
And the bees' buzzing,
Added glamour to the
Casts' rhyming
The fireflies' swirling
Made a ring of fire,
That put me on spotlight
The scene was at its top
And was visible to me
As a fairy tale on-sight!
~Aryaman Mishra
Beautifully Composed 👌 Loved the Use of poetic devices . Could feel the Music 🎵 in the air . Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up ! God bless .
ReplyDeleteVivid and mesmerising, My dear! I could imagine myself in those woods. I thought the wolves would have a larger role to play in the saga though.
ReplyDeleteYou must write more. There is plenty more where this came from!
Love, Bobby Mamu
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ReplyDeleteAmazing!!! Loved the rhyme and the tune set. Very vivid imagery. The rhythm created was very good. I loved the way you have showcased the fear of unknown but also the urge to explore. Kudos!
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